My dad in Elryx form LOL

WELL. A while ago, I wrote a story called Stormchaser for school. My dad asked me to draw one of the creatures, so I did-but based on his appearance. Lol. This took me about... 50 minutes at the most.
I'm gonna post the story, don't worry. I won't leave you guys wondering about my crappy little story.
AGH, writing it on paper hurt my hand so much, then I had to type it all. I'm kind of proud of my work though.